The following appeared in a letter from the faculty committee to the president of Seatown University:
A study conducted at nearby Oceania University showed that faculty retention is higher when professors are offered free tuition at the university for their own college-aged children. Therefore, Seatown should institute a free-tuition policy for its professors for the purpose of enhancing morale among the faculty and luring new professors.
Looks like seatown university is planning to expand its faculty and seems like the current faculty in unhappy with the management. The faculty committee's reasoning is based on several logical and statistical fallacies. Before implementing this the president has to know several other unknowns in order to implement this successfully.
First the the letter claims that the study conducted at nearby oceania university - the university was able to retain the faculty when their own children are given free education. But we need to be sure about the professors economic background of the oceania and seatown university. May be faculties salary is less that is what making them its a luring offer to make their students get educated freely. Or may be the oceania is a leader in terms of qulity education which is what making the oceania professors its an attractive offer. Before implementing the same at seatown we need to be sure how similar the oceania and seatown in terms of education and economic background of the professors.May its that the courses they indent to study for is not available anywhere and only oceania provides it. Which may not be the case in seatown
Secondly , May be the teachers in seatown are not given enough challenge in seatown. May be their salary is too low. May the management is too bad. Or there might be another university opened recently nearby which is offering better package , better quality of materials for providing education. This might be the case in oceania and retention might be an coincidence.
Lastly, We need to think about the free tuition policy for college-aged children. How feasible is that in case of seatown to provide free education? may be oceania has enough fun=ding . May be its a public university. If the professors themselves are funded low if they provide free education it can be detrimental to the college itself. The professors might still choose to leave. Do we really have a statistics to backup that the existing professors have college aged children? Even if they provide free tuition do they have all the courses the students want to pursue? If we get proper evidence that all these are plausible then we can be assured that the university will be able to retain their professors and will attract new one's.
The faculty committees intentions are clear. They want to increase the faculty's size while retaining the best: To provide quality education to its students. But the above reasoning might be detrimental to their plans to expand its staff strength. The president needs to analyse thoroughly the data before implementing anything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'lastly', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221982758621 0.25644967241 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.198275862069 0.15541462614 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10775862069 0.0836205057962 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366379310345 0.0520304965353 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0272364105082 229% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0883620689655 0.125424944231 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0366379310345 0.0416121511921 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74480523406 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0452586206897 0.026700313972 170% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103448275862 0.113004496875 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258620689655 0.0255425247493 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129310344828 0.0127820249294 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2621.0 2731.13054187 96% => OK
No of words: 437.0 446.07635468 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99771167048 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37299771167 0.378187486979 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295194508009 0.287650121315 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187643020595 0.208842608468 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139588100686 0.135150697306 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74480523406 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 207.018472906 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446224256293 0.469332199767 95% => OK
Word variations: 48.7867892091 52.1807786196 93% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.039408867 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8076923077 23.2022227129 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3619627968 57.7814097925 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.807692308 141.986410481 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8076923077 23.2022227129 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.724660767414 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.58251231527 502% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.3271431086 51.9672348444 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.16666666667 1.8405768891 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516585934179 0.441005458295 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133386431678 0.135418324435 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106042610957 0.0829849096947 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503709842076 0.58762219726 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152378749808 0.147661913831 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184395605322 0.193483328276 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111725763311 0.0970749176394 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3787845334 0.42659136922 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687694003726 0.0774707102158 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33504314596 0.312017818177 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963131525911 0.0698173142475 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.33743842365 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.82512315271 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 6.46551724138 217% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 14.657635468 130% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.