In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by IT, with many advances in this field. However, while these technological advances have brought many benefits to the world, it can be argued that these developments in IT will result in more negative impacts than positive.
To begin, email has made communication, especially abroad, much simpler and faster, resulting in numerous benefits for commerce and business. Furthermore, the World Wide Web means that information on every conceivable subject is now available to us. For example, people can access news, medical advice, online education courses and much more via the internet. It is evident that these improvements have made life far easier and more convenient for large numbers of people and will continue to do so for decades to come.
Nevertheless, the effects of this new technology have not all been beneficial. For example, many people feel that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional forms of communication such as letter writing, telephone and face-to-face conversation. This could result in a decline in people's basic ability to socialize and interact with each other on a day-to-day basis.
In addition, the large size of the Web has meant that it is nearly impossible to regulate and control. This has led to many concerns regarding children accessing unsuitable websites and viruses. Unfortunately, this kind of problem might even get worse in the future at least until more regulated systems are set up.
In conclusion, developments in IT have brought many benefits, yet I believe developments relating to new technology are likely to produce many negative effects in the future that must be addressed if we are to avoid damaging impacts on individuals and society.
Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'while', 'at least', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247648902821 0.220444632235 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.163009404389 0.167888034529 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12539184953 0.0606518309736 207% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0470219435737 0.0506257000042 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0188087774295 0.118615021944 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.128526645768 0.107062808482 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0532915360502 0.041066498444 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93075096439 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.0385302599488 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00313479623824 0.00132118243153 237% => OK
Determiners: 0.0752351097179 0.0714148451538 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0219435736677 0.0191574576366 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00313479623824 0.00930345855455 34% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1796.0 1141.60824742 157% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.134020619 140% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23611111111 5.53046319177 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78085437643 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381944444444 0.284621296913 134% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319444444444 0.211203875043 151% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229166666667 0.133321485273 172% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142361111111 0.0843313296314 169% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93075096439 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.622163163488 98% => OK
Word variations: 67.1649647573 62.8969750728 107% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1538461538 16.4300151701 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7931366029 44.7399317507 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 90.9928171075 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 16.4300151701 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 54.0982905983 37.5504026743 144% => OK
Elegance: 1.87671232877 1.13073093955 166% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565758295593 0.331212695627 171% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0784616127579 0.0927372745006 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0538778136681 0.0736520305886 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589635186153 0.579516596996 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167625266665 0.180689518051 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207774554865 0.122183219658 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106775562956 0.0765303033291 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245907823132 0.211926503985 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0428185696101 0.0737400523855 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338579430317 0.203819188451 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087204022062 0.067151250289 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.45360824742 40% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.48453608247 404% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.