My Speaking context "TPO-1) Speaking Question #3,4,5,6
TPO-1) speaking Question #3
It has been stated that the university is planning to buy new sculpture. On this issue the student wrote a letter to university’s newspaper opposing this plan. He mentioned that as the university is in a poor financial condition buying such an expensive sculpture will not only impose high expenses on the university’s expenditures, but also it will occupy huge amount of green space in front of the campus center. On contrary, the lady found the plan a nice decision as she believes that the boy was misunderstood about the one who is going to pay for the price. The true fact is that; it has been donated rather than being purchased. Furthermore, she asserted that the problem with the area which he mentioned is nothing more than an excuse. In fact, as they usually play soccer at that part of campus, they just feel uncomfortable changing their position and playing soccer in other part of campus.
TPO-1) speaking Question #4
The article is about Groupthink literally/conceptually meaning the tendency of individual members of group to conform their opinion to the opinion of majority of the group members (group consensus) even though it may lead to/leave an unfavorable/unpleasant outcome. For further covering the concept the man told about his own experience when he was working at a computer company in a couple of years ago. He told that, at that time, based on what market research was showing, he and his co-worker came up with an idea that if the company had changed the appearance of its products and made them look more up to date it could have led to an increase in the number of sales. So they decided to put their idea forward in group . At first, more than half of the group enthusiastically welcomed the idea, but everything changed as one of the senior managers stood against the idea and said “the technologically advancement of products rather than their appearance has always been the company’s policy, changing look will just impose the cost which is unnecessary”. It didn’t take a long time that everyone changed their mind and sided with senior’s opinion because they didn’t want to leave bad impression on his mind and as a result of this decision they lost remarkable/ salient number of their regular customer. This how the man explained Groupthink.
TPO-1) speaking Question #5
Sounds like the lady is supposed to take bunch of the kids to the zoo tomorrow and to do so she decided to rent a van. But now that she called the rental agency she found out that they are having no vans available to rent for tomorrow (no rental vans available). In this regard she has 2 solutions to ease the problem. The first solution is not preferable since barrowing one car can’t ease her problem because the number of kids are too many to be fit in one car, instead, she should barrow two cars but on that condition she will have a problem of finding the one to drive the other car. The second solution is far better since by using public transportation, and by considering that there is a bus line going right past the zoo she can easily take kids to the zoo even though it might be hard to control them since they are so naughty. If I were in her shoes, I would personally go for second solution since the problem with second solution is not a big deal in comparison with the first one.
TPO-1) speaking Question #6
It has been stated that the experiment was conducted for better realizing the intellectual abilities of babies in doing basic mathematical calculations. In this experiment they put a five-month years old baby under study. first they show a doll to baby and then they hide it behind the screen/curtain. After a while they show the second doll to baby and hide it in the same place. As the baby was already shown two dolls, he knew that there should be 2 dolls behind the screen. In the following they secretly took away one of the dolls and as they were tracking the baby’s eye movement, they raised the screen. They noticed that the baby was staring at doll. The same behavior shown when the baby is astonished by sth. So they comprehended that the baby was astonished as he expects to see 2 dolls which in turn vindicates babies intellectual abilities in doing basic mathematical calculations.
- My Speaking context "TPO-1) Speaking Question #3,4,5,6 70
- A/D ? Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office. 70
- A D Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries 93
- A D Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country 60
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'in fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22553699284 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.17661097852 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0704057279236 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393794749403 0.046263068375 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0692124105012 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131264916468 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.054892601432 0.0351676179071 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89010080562 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262529832936 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0035799522673 0.00188951952338 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.106205250597 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143198090692 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0107398568019 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4566.0 2387.08602151 191% => OK
No of words: 750.0 408.028673835 184% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.088 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23317569696 4.48200974243 117% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290666666667 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158666666667 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0986666666667 0.112833075102 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89010080562 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 348.0 212.727598566 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 60.3233963292 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8620689655 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.415469332 48.84282405 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.448275862 120.699889404 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8620689655 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48275862069 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.5376344086 176% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 47.8620689655 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.44351464435 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656502472811 0.300154397459 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134313452714 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0887254480324 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570046125894 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.201921791763 0.151897553556 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284507151429 0.114077575197 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538715879503 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0 0.336927656856 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.067059652881 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342483793746 0.210909579961 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.326349879975 0.0618886996521 527% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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