The differences between the rich and poor in the world today seem to be increasing. What do you think are the causes of this? What if anything should be done to stop this from happening?
Nowadays the gap between poor and rich people is widening day by day. This is a cancerous issue that can cause adverse effect on the whole world. So this is an important issue that should be discussed by the people from every nation. This essay tries to note down the issues and the solutions that assist to bridge this gap.
In the current era, more than sixty per cent of wealth of India belongs to the rich people whereas others considered as poor. The same poor-rich ratio is replicated in other countries also. This may due to the following reasons. Firstly, lack of proper education which leads to unemployment, this can create partiality. People cannot achieve good jobs due to their poor education which is provided by the government. Secondly, the government is not ready to ensure the equal distribution of income and they help the people who are corrupted and both the party which rules the government and opponent may work together to rescue the corrupted politicians.
To tackle these issues, more efficient governing system should be introduced. Both state and national government should maintain a robust socio-economic equilibrium in societies. Moreover, they must ensure the equality in educational field as well as in the professional field. Certain jobs and educational courses have to be reserved for the people from the bottom of the society .To avoid the polarization, government must introduce transparent laws against corruption .To cite an example, a law in India named as ‘LOKPAL’ which can control corruption to an extent . Additionally, all political leaders including prime minister cannot escape from this law , if he is corrupted .Also , income tax should be collected from rich and it have to be used for the welfare of the poor.
In a nutshell, the discrimination of rich and poor is a serious issue which should be wiped-out from every nation immediately. Only governing authorities can take an action to prevent its cancerous growth.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'as well as', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235457063712 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.15512465374 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105263157895 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415512465374 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.016620498615 0.0437548338989 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0941828254848 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0387811634349 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90596802949 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360110803324 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00277008310249 0.00163938923432 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.130193905817 0.0861772015684 151% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0415512465374 0.021408717616 194% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0249307479224 0.011925033212 209% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1988.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07951070336 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360856269113 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250764525994 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195718654434 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155963302752 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90596802949 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.148806252 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2352941176 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9249954599 49.517814964 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.941176471 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.814263465372 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.311746717 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.72727272727 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524374718142 0.332605444948 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113614737529 0.102741220458 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0747232778862 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510825499931 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145152227009 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201797794067 0.134430193775 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930279283773 0.0742795772207 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395068789966 0.324371583561 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0763310251136 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359008634215 0.228012699653 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767191036734 0.058150111329 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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