You are going to visit New Zealand for an ‘English and Homestay’ program.
You have just received details of your homestay host family.
Write your first letter to the family. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask the family some questions to get information that is
important to you
tell the family about your arrival date and time
Dear Mr. Mark Kennedy,
Greetings !!
I am really happy to get an opportunity to be a home-stay guest in your hometown. I am very thankful to you for this splendid chances to be your kind guest.
My name is Mohammed Aslam Noor Mohammed. I am an Indian and my hometown is Sivakasi, which is famously called as "Kutty Japan". I am 30 years old. My hobbies are listening sermons and attending social services. Do have I to bring computer with me or do you have the spare system in your home? Do you need any essential things to bring, which is not available spare in your home for my usage? Please inform one week before of my departure.
I will arrive Newzealand on 10th December 2016 in the evening around 6 pm Newzealand GST time. My flight tickets are confirmed on the above schedule and the flight name is Cathey Pacific for your information.
I am expecting your arrival in Newzealand International Airport to welcome and pick me to your home.
Have a nice and good weekend. My sincere thanks and regards to you and your family.
Yours truly,
Mohammed Aslam
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| 2019-02-14 | navjot jammu | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-07 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
| 2016-09-08 | enaslam | 47 | view |
| 2016-09-08 | enaslam | 67 | view |
| 2016-09-08 | enaslam | 73 | view |
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'really', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.285714285714 0.220444632235 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.147465437788 0.167888034529 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0606518309736 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0276497695853 0.0506257000042 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.129032258065 0.118615021944 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.073732718894 0.107062808482 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0230414746544 0.041066498444 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67868386007 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0414746543779 0.0385302599488 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0460829493088 0.0714148451538 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00460829493088 0.0191574576366 24% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00921658986175 0.00930345855455 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1087.0 1141.60824742 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.134020619 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66145833333 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328125 0.284621296913 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229166666667 0.211203875043 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.133321485273 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109375 0.0843313296314 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67868386007 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 62.4596848922 62.8969750728 99% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.4300151701 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1480595409 44.7399317507 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9375 90.9928171075 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.4300151701 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.1875 0.613754768223 31% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 34.9166666667 37.5504026743 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.25757575758 1.13073093955 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363152148942 0.331212695627 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0859207652982 0.0927372745006 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113429177521 0.0736520305886 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588162289631 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.254533237812 0.180689518051 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112404851331 0.122183219658 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101643208994 0.0765303033291 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.138241745505 0.211926503985 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0783690466849 0.0737400523855 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187042016195 0.203819188451 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943184880183 0.067151250289 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.0206185567 199% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.