The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night programs has devoted time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late night program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenue, we should restore time devoted to weather and local news to its former level."
The author cites that late night news program has devoted increased time to national news over the weather and local news. This is a good thing as more people will come to know about what is happening in the country. A resident of the country should have erudite knowledge of the nation.
Over the past years, most of the complaints received were concerned with station's coverage of weather and local news. The business manager has not properly mentioned the concerns of the viewers. The complaints may be regarding the improper weather news from the television station. The news which is shown on the television might not guve the accurate news which the residents desired. The complaints can be regarding the reporters who are covering the weather and local news. The reporters may be naive to show the news in a prudent manner. The number of complaints received is not given. The number may be hundred, thousand, etc.
The manager has told that local businesses have rescind their advertising contracts with the television station. I will agree with this point to a certain extent. It might happen that they have canceled their contracts due to increased time of national news than local news. Another reason might be that television station has increased their advertising amount which is not within the budget of the local people. One more reason may be that more number of people do not watch the late night news program. This is a superfluos wastage of money with respect to advertising.
The business manager tends to restore the timing devoted to local and weather news to its former level to avoid losing any further advertising revenues. He or she is right to certain extent that some more time should be devoted to local news but other factors should also be consider while restoring the amount of time or rather changing the time of telecast of the news. The judging commitee should consider the details of the complaints received and find out the reason behind the rescinding of advertising contracts by local business. They should do a survey among the resident of the local people and find out the exact reason behind their deteriorating channel rating and then take measures to restore the channel ratings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ather news from the television station. The news which is shown on the television m...
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...urate news which the residents desired. The complaints can be regarding the reporte...
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...re covering the weather and local news. The reporters may be naive to show the news...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'as to', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2725 0.25644967241 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.1625 0.15541462614 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095 0.0836205057962 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0225 0.0520304965353 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0275 0.0272364105082 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.125424944231 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0525 0.0416121511921 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45693873121 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325 0.026700313972 122% => OK
Particles: 0.005 0.001811407834 276% => OK
Determiners: 0.14 0.113004496875 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0375 0.0255425247493 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.0127820249294 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2235.0 2731.13054187 82% => OK
No of words: 376.0 446.07635468 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94414893617 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.57801047555 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356382978723 0.378187486979 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271276595745 0.287650121315 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18085106383 0.208842608468 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0984042553191 0.135150697306 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45693873121 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 207.018472906 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.469332199767 95% => OK
Word variations: 46.5450210898 52.1807786196 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.039408867 105% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9047619048 23.2022227129 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9812640539 57.7814097925 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 141.986410481 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 23.2022227129 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.724660767414 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.58251231527 335% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.0324214792 51.9672348444 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.8405768891 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.634025241691 0.441005458295 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145334062316 0.135418324435 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0876130656863 0.0829849096947 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576553572667 0.58762219726 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130326609897 0.147661913831 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268126917728 0.193483328276 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109192375331 0.0970749176394 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.455712752951 0.42659136922 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0336161665942 0.0774707102158 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.47717300111 0.312017818177 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677444292318 0.0698173142475 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 6.46551724138 155% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 14.657635468 116% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.