TOEFL 10 SEP Q2
Do you agree or disagree? Internet should be like other services such as roads, and government should provide it to the public with no cost.
Although some of my friends agree the above statement as suitable facilities for them, but from
my vantage point, it may not help the qualities of the internet. Not only the competitions of the
companies of the internet providers would be eliminated, but also that might have lots of
expenditures to the government. I don’t subscribe the above statement due to couple of reasons
which I will explore in the following essay.
The first exquisite point to mention is that the competition between the internet provider
services companies would be eliminated. If the internet is free for all people, then the internet
companies can’t be active and they will be bankruptcy and the government as the only internet
provider also can’t be provide the high-quality internet because, the exclusive of the this business
lies just in the control of the government and since there is no other internet providers to compete
with them in order to have new costumers. If there are several companies as internet provider,
they will make lots of efforts to obtain and maintain their customers. These efforts can be the
high-quality internet with low expenditure and as a result, the internet consumer can benefits
from this subject in two ways. A vivid example can be shed light on this subject is my country.
For us in our country, there are several internet companies with disparate properties so that
everybody can choose one of them due to their requirements. I remember last year, I changed my
internet provider company because of its weak services. I think if there exists only one company
in this area so I would have to be patient about my internet quality.
Another reason that deserves some words is that if the government provides the internet for
public freely therefore, the government has to pay lots of expenditure. This expenditure can
affect the budget of the infrastructures such as constructing roads, bridges and etc. My father’s
experience is an appropriate example of this. In the past the internet was just in the exclusive of
the government. Although the government was receiving little from people but it was not
sufficient for the complete expenditure of the internet and consequently had to pay the remained
portion of the expenditure. My father as government worker describes the situations of that time
that this new extra expenditure how affected the country’s budget. Finally, the government
decided to change the condition gradually to persuade the private company to work in this field.
To make long story short, I can say that because of the competition between the internet
services private companies and as a result the quality of the internet, the internet shouldn’t be
free. Moreover, this obviously affects the country’s budget that in my view it is not appropriate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...lity internet because, the exclusive of the this business lies just in the control of t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
... as a result, the internet consumer can benefits from this subject in two ways. A vivid...
^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 78, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...res such as constructing roads, bridges and etc. My father's experience is an appr...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'as to', 'i think', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241904761905 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.12380952381 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0838095238095 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342857142857 0.046263068375 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0514285714286 0.0685040099705 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.00952380952381 0.0351676179071 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.00497532252 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266666666667 0.0309702414327 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129523809524 0.0887237588012 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304761904762 0.0209618222197 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00761904761905 0.0139019557991 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2849.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 462.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16666666667 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374458874459 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32683982684 0.251872472559 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248917748918 0.174417080927 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158008658009 0.112833075102 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00497532252 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45670995671 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0410829643 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4562626693 48.84282405 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.45 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.644075263715 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.5376344086 661% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 55.783982684 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.83636363636 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258233171756 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151927186989 0.103427244359 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0982052871124 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.766657718308 0.497263757937 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.231548589264 0.151897553556 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112659890216 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625157291786 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.157716455554 0.336927656856 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0953966599962 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106482726558 0.210909579961 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520876826683 0.0618886996521 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.