A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To kill animals for food is completely an individual affair.But however exploiting animals for unnecessary chores is not agreed in this essay.So I feel that limits should prevail in animal killing without restricting that completely.
It is well known that humans are high conscious animals among all living organisms.So treating animals equal to human is not necessary.Animals could be used to satisfy primary needs of human such as milk.But hurting them for unnecessary reasons should be banned.For instance,killing goats on a festival day in some religions is still practised.Such kind of activities would kill poor animals unnecessarily as well as provokes violence in the society.
On the other hand,there are some situations where killing an animal will be necessary for a longer good.For example experimenting on rats before humans under medical activities would obviously give a loss but comparitively a lower one.
To kill animals just for fun is something which should be banned.For evidence in countries like India,cock fight still prevails during some occasions in the rural parts.As there are two sides for everything animal killing also has a good side.As it is aware,mercy killing justifies that.Recently some infected sheep were killed under mercy killing law just to protect other sheep from getting infected.
Thus though some people support animal killing and some people support equalism,some laws should prevail on these activities.As the reasons for which animal killing differs the argument of treating animals equal to humans does not hold good.Also killing animals for purposes other than food and research such as cock fight would not do any good.
And lastly I would like to say despite killing animals for food lies in individuals interest,killing dumb living organisms just to satisfy one's taste buds is not appealing.When there are alternatives available it would be better to go for them as killing costs a life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260061919505 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.195046439628 0.155533422707 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108359133127 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0681114551084 0.0501214627716 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0216718266254 0.0437548338989 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133126934985 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0743034055728 0.0403226058552 184% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.01691727454 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278637770898 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.00163938923432 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.077399380805 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0340557275542 0.021408717616 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00928792569659 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1943.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.37049180328 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403278688525 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318032786885 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193442622951 0.203846283523 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140983606557 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01691727454 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.5237544531 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 50.8333333333 20.7743622355 245% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 83.385483682 49.517814964 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 323.833333333 127.492653851 254% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8333333333 20.7743622355 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 0.814263465372 327% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 3.99599198397 626% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 82.6366120219 49.1944974215 168% => OK
Elegance: 1.64130434783 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292197559503 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.200946144847 0.102741220458 196% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0459049746277 0.0668466124924 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.97722322857e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170794135142 0.134430193775 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654273211451 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230758760056 0.324371583561 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0575997258676 0.0638462369009 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170794135142 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654273211451 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.