You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have
never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.
Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter
• explain your situation
• say why you feel unsure about living in the city
• ask some questions about life in the city
Dear Donald,
Hope you are doing well. Actually, a week before I offered for a new job in Melbourne, Australia. I am enthusiastic to work in Australia.
Right now, I am living in Chennai, India. It is a multicultural country and ease to understand the mind-thoughts of the people who are living in my country.
Truly speaking, I do not know any idea about Australia. I never visited before to this country.
Can you please tell me something about the cost of living? So that, I can arrange some dollars in advance. What about the climate condition over there in that country.
According to that, I will bring sweater, rain coat and summer costumes to prevent from vigilant climate, if any.
Please guide me, if there is anything I missed out above. I am expecting your land information and beloved reply from you.
Yours lovingly,
Aslam.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226744186047 0.220444632235 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.156976744186 0.167888034529 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0232558139535 0.0606518309736 38% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.0506257000042 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0988372093023 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127906976744 0.107062808482 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0290697674419 0.041066498444 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74876078802 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290697674419 0.0385302599488 75% => OK
Particles: 0.00581395348837 0.00132118243153 440% => OK
Determiners: 0.0755813953488 0.0714148451538 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174418604651 0.0191574576366 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116279069767 0.00930345855455 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 852.0 1141.60824742 75% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.134020619 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83561643836 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78085437643 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328767123288 0.284621296913 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246575342466 0.211203875043 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178082191781 0.133321485273 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109589041096 0.0843313296314 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74876078802 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698630136986 0.622163163488 112% => OK
Word variations: 71.7155773191 62.8969750728 114% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 10.4285714286 16.4300151701 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3168694264 44.7399317507 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8571428571 90.9928171075 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.4285714286 16.4300151701 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.357142857143 0.613754768223 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 35.0861056751 37.5504026743 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.26923076923 1.13073093955 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285227555263 0.331212695627 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0671424961861 0.0927372745006 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692068362839 0.0736520305886 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598664744361 0.579516596996 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162321750611 0.180689518051 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870952908995 0.122183219658 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509217959795 0.0765303033291 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0827671282035 0.211926503985 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0277117922655 0.0737400523855 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135326366689 0.203819188451 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399025794008 0.067151250289 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.