You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Dear James,
I’ve recently got your letter that I’ve been waiting for ages and feel a bit disappointed that there is no opportunity to talk to each other more frequent. However, I’m very glad that you have finally graduated a high school and will start a new life soon. I think you need to take a break with your educational process and try to work for a while. There are more difficult subjects there and you will have caught up with studying and don’t have a free time at all.
By the way, there are a lot of programs provided by local companies in your city that aimed to employ predominantly youth. This is a good opportunity for you to try yourself working and, moreover, collect money for your forthcoming education. When you finally decide to study in college or university, you’ll have enough cash to pay your studying fees.
I want to advise you to buy some local newspapers. There are units with job advertisements. But first of all, you need to make an appropriate CV. Don’t forget to note your communication abilities. I think, consultant in supermarket is good job position to start with. Especially, in electronic department. This is your field.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you about job finding and wish you good luck!
Your sincerely,
Givi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you good luck! Your sincerely, Givi
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'by the way', 'first of all', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.181818181818 0.220444632235 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.167888034529 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727272727273 0.0606518309736 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0509090909091 0.0506257000042 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0945454545455 0.118615021944 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.08 0.107062808482 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0363636363636 0.041066498444 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82111834362 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0509090909091 0.0385302599488 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00363636363636 0.00132118243153 275% => OK
Determiners: 0.0618181818182 0.0714148451538 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00727272727273 0.0191574576366 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00727272727273 0.00930345855455 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1315.0 1141.60824742 115% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.134020619 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92342342342 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288288288288 0.284621296913 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22972972973 0.211203875043 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18018018018 0.133321485273 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130630630631 0.0843313296314 155% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82111834362 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 64.0589713038 62.8969750728 102% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.875 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8223072709 44.7399317507 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1875 90.9928171075 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.613754768223 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 36.847972973 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 0.911111111111 1.13073093955 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32979603379 0.331212695627 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.050783405649 0.0927372745006 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0463961463151 0.0736520305886 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486768938073 0.579516596996 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185636816961 0.180689518051 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121886906777 0.122183219658 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965614077083 0.0765303033291 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308436058899 0.211926503985 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0615965046568 0.0737400523855 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244460299845 0.203819188451 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385399597467 0.067151250289 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.