You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mrs. Keller
describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be
suitable for the job.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you to apply for a job which is advertised in newspaper.
My name is Mehriban Rahimova. I had 5 years’ experience as housekeeper. Then I get married and was on maternity leave for the 3 years. Now I have a big family and all works throughout the house I am doing selflessly. As my children are at school from early morning till 6 pm, I have free time for working.
I am used to work in fast paste and I enjoy doing household works. I have pleasant personality and good communication skills.
Also, I have attached to this email my skills and experience regarding house cleaning.
In addition I could work as baby sister, if it’s requested. If you find my skills and credentials suitable please contact me to number 00523863147. I looking forward to discussing the details with you personally.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mehriban
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill 6 pm, I have free time for working. I am used to work in fast paste and I en...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to working'.
Suggestion: used to working
..., I have free time for working. I am used to work in fast paste and I enjoy doing househo...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...perience regarding house cleaning. In addition I could work as baby sister, if it&apos...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...lease contact me to number 00523863147. I looking forward to discussing the detai...
^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254143646409 0.220444632235 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.17679558011 0.167888034529 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0441988950276 0.0606518309736 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0386740331492 0.0506257000042 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.127071823204 0.118615021944 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0939226519337 0.107062808482 88% => OK
Participles: 0.060773480663 0.041066498444 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08921157245 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0276243093923 0.0385302599488 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0386740331492 0.0714148451538 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00552486187845 0.0191574576366 29% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00552486187845 0.00930345855455 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 916.0 1141.60824742 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.134020619 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87179487179 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78085437643 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314102564103 0.284621296913 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262820512821 0.211203875043 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205128205128 0.133321485273 154% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153846153846 0.0843313296314 182% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.08921157245 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622163163488 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.9067215842 62.8969750728 106% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 11.1428571429 16.4300151701 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.0336451695 44.7399317507 45% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4285714286 90.9928171075 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1428571429 16.4300151701 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 37.4249084249 37.5504026743 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.1935483871 1.13073093955 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303260219205 0.331212695627 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0641331102914 0.0927372745006 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551622137725 0.0736520305886 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590923395909 0.579516596996 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.251566653098 0.180689518051 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969763724155 0.122183219658 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847698816001 0.0765303033291 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.12628941516 0.211926503985 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0352914600795 0.0737400523855 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171623270697 0.203819188451 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737957080202 0.067151250289 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.