The graph below shows the unemployment rates in two European countries since 2000 and predicted unemployment rates until 2020.
The graph represents the percentage of labour force rates in Spain and France from 2000 to 2020.
Overall, the unemployment rates in France were relatively stable within the graph given. Comparatively, Spanish people who were out of work are expected to increase by 2020.
Looking in details, about 2.2% of people from Spain were unemployed in 2000 which figure was almost doubled the unemployment in France (about 5.8%). Between 2005 and 2010, the unemployment rates increased substantially from 4% to 10%, exceeding the percentage in France, which had showed a slight increase from 5.2% to 6.5% at the same time. After that, there was a continuous increase in the percentage of unemployment rates in Spain to reach at above 12% in 2015, the proportion in France with unemployment remained unchanged at this time. Spain will have the highest unemployment rates in 2020 (about 11%), whilst French unemployment rate is expected to be same at 5.8%.
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 36
- The pie chart below shows the methods of booked for English courses by international students in three different countries in 2009 and in 2010. 73
- As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- “Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree? 67
Discourse Markers used:
['look']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261111111111 0.268076937826 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.127777777778 0.116061578633 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0277777777778 0.0366838410393 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.172222222222 0.155750635184 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0388888888889 0.0379272487307 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8332351904 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.0210936926555 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0948980150116 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00555555555556 0.00437022459523 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.00967000014798 172% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 946.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.9 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10322580645 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322580645161 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21935483871 0.247514529752 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18064516129 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129032258065 0.112407865282 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8332351904 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 44.8133765353 49.3433353143 91% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1428571429 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4030703112 42.9750493124 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.142857142857 0.689975730869 21% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 44.0783410138 47.7609492067 92% => OK
Elegance: 3.03571428571 2.94281807926 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405618664413 0.418131533498 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.196945038263 0.181151798455 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0854847859541 0.0850326197045 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.704799662665 0.706616315825 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132903378184 0.157042692854 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244218926349 0.228904883108 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103451281706 0.108899403657 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327645206462 0.367819155151 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0286739032885 0.0812612215331 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319852852163 0.316326947829 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443161104548 0.0921553760075 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.