In some countries children start school at the age of four and in the other countries at the age of seven. Some people believe that early school start is affecting parent child relationship. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
A child has to follow multiple steps to acquire education in his life and school education is considered first and the most important step in this journey. Education experts suggest that best age to start early education is seven, which few reckon that formal education at the age of four can bring better results.
The proponents of early education argue that early formal education can develop social as well intellectual skills in kids earlier, which can be very advantageous for his further study. According to them such students feel more comfortable to interact with other students and teachers than others who starts school late. Additionally, early education on literacy and numeracy can help kids to get better understating in their further education.
On the contrary, people against this trend have different point view and they say that this time period of his age, kids should spend with his parents learning basic behavior traits. They argue that a parent is a best teacher for a child, so parents should devote their time to teach their kid in his beginning age. Furthermore, early education can hinder holistic development of a child and can make him physically and psychologically sick. A research work by teachers and education experts in England have brought the facts in light that the children, who start formal study in the age of seven, shows better educational achievements.
To conclude, I believe that starting years of childhood should be spent with parents and play activities. Putting children under the pressure of study can hamper holistic growth of a child, hence, this practice should be discouraged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ior traits. They argue that a parent is a best teacher for a child, so parents sh...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269896193772 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.141868512111 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103806228374 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449826989619 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0449826989619 0.0437548338989 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128027681661 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0276816608997 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70226494867 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0276816608997 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0657439446367 0.0861772015684 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.038062283737 0.021408717616 178% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138408304498 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1644.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18045112782 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383458646617 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266917293233 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203007518797 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127819548872 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70226494867 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.8060214776 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1818181818 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9654450296 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.454545455 127.492653851 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7743622355 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.8735475051 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.83582089552 1.69124875643 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379140163504 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105879455335 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0842070661209 0.0668466124924 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584848419534 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118424273264 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161819006996 0.134430193775 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825246716781 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323734560391 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0453474625713 0.0638462369009 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252564645195 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863601621989 0.058150111329 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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