agree/ disagree? people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment- doing things they like to do- rather than doing things they should do.
Technological advances and economic progress have led to more speed and less drudgery in all parts of life. However, does it cause less working hours and more leisure time? In my opinion, nowadays people incline to work harder and paying less attention to their personal enjoyment, for reasons to come.
Firstly, working is more profitable than enjoyment. Raising salaries have been brought by economic progresses especially in rich countries. When people are paid more to work, they tend to work more hours because working becomes more beneficial. On the other hand leisure activities become stres...
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Essay evaluation report
because of it’s beneficial aspects
because of its beneficial aspects
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 334 350
No. of Characters: 1680 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.275 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.03 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.58 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.984 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.323 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260526315789 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.144736842105 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110526315789 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0631578947368 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0289473684211 0.0685040099705 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126315789474 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0447368421053 0.0351676179071 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71089154103 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0447368421053 0.0309702414327 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00263157894737 0.00188951952338 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.0447368421053 0.0887237588012 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00263157894737 0.0209618222197 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0131578947368 0.0139019557991 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2075.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 335.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19402985075 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385074626866 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310447761194 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194029850746 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119402985075 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71089154103 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594029850746 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 67.7703523106 59.2087087015 114% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9375 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7300555659 48.84282405 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.6875 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 51.9822761194 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.82222222222 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122420786301 0.300154397459 41% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0915268317589 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.07828865243 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485175712571 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190004304097 0.151897553556 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047677393224 0.114077575197 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392277011601 0.0781384742642 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382992395491 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0177589666879 0.067059652881 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926636145806 0.210909579961 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299628123432 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.