Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: in twenty years there will be fewer cars on the road than there are today.
Cars have always been one of the best dreams for people especially for the young ages. People work hard and earn money every day. They want to spend their money by buying some new stuff. One of the most attractive things for people are cars. People tend to buy a car and use it for a short time and exchange it by another one. They love to use modern technologies in new cars. People are growing and they are going to be lazier in next years. New generation will be technology freak, because of all new technologies these days. For all of the reasons, in my view, people will use cars more than today.
In the first place, the population of people are going to be grown up. They are increasing in numbers every single day. More people will increase the demand of cars. Cars factories will produce more cars for more demands. They would have a really good market for their products. It is all they need to encourage for more products. I read an article in a newspaper in my home country Iran that was about this issue. Some data analysts predict a big raise in population in 10 years. New population will need new schools, new job opportunities, new roads, new homes and new cars.
In the second place, people are going to be lazy and a kind of couch potato by these new technologies. They will tempt to go anywhere by cars more than now. They prefer to spend their times by their cell phones and their laptops to connect with other people or playing some online games. For instance, my father like to walk in parks. He goes to park every day in the morning. He loves walking. In my generation, most of people tempt to use cars for transportation, but they feel guilty after that and they have an average two hours walking during each week. In the new generation such as my son, they never want to move for anything. They prefer to do all things online and they spend most of their time by some new technologies. My son's age people prefer to use cars every day and everywhere. They will not feel guilty at all. They are real car users.
To sum up, people are going to increase in twenty years as the past and they are more interested to use cars instead of walking. These items will make a good market for car's companies and they will product more cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 533, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...of all new technologies these days. For all of the reasons, in my view, people will use ca...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ng. He loves walking. In my generation, most of people tempt to use cars for transportation, b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in my view', 'to sum up', 'in the first place', 'in the second place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243010752688 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.156989247312 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0924731182796 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0258064516129 0.046263068375 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0752688172043 0.0685040099705 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116129032258 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0301075268817 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.25326671399 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408602150538 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00430107526882 0.00188951952338 228% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860215053763 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215053763441 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00215053763441 0.0139019557991 15% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2261.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 420.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38333333333 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.242857142857 0.338922669872 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.12380952381 0.251872472559 49% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0880952380952 0.174417080927 51% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0619047619048 0.112833075102 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25326671399 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.6487240345 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6684587814 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.125 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0007560392 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.65625 120.699889404 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.644075263715 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 25.505952381 45.7405998639 56% => OK
Elegance: 1.50833333333 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193349591372 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103696265843 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0746051632628 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.385958142644 0.497263757937 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129585007296 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727790404725 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594349845775 0.0781384742642 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.46522288176 0.336927656856 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0257696287947 0.067059652881 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160398275971 0.210909579961 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246614709027 0.0618886996521 40% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.