People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter, describe the problems, explain how they are affecting people, say what the company should do help.
Dear Sir,
I am Bhumika Suryavanshi, one of your client using the internet service of your company at zone-II, Ghatlodiya. I am intending to write this letter in order to draw your attention towards the problem facing by all the residents of this area in using the broadband services provided by you.
We all are highly disappointed with the speed of the internet which is slower than the speed committed during the deal. Most of the time we are facing the network encountered with the runtime error due to its snail-paced speed. In fact, you would not believe but we have to wait for several min...
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 227 250
No. of Characters: 1047 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.882 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.612 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.546 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.743 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.167 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.685 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.208 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223577235772 0.220444632235 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.154471544715 0.167888034529 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0813008130081 0.0606518309736 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406504065041 0.0506257000042 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0934959349593 0.118615021944 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126016260163 0.107062808482 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0365853658537 0.041066498444 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60635146923 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0528455284553 0.0385302599488 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109756097561 0.0714148451538 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121951219512 0.0191574576366 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00406504065041 0.00930345855455 44% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1312.0 1141.60824742 115% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.134020619 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77973568282 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78085437643 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281938325991 0.284621296913 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224669603524 0.211203875043 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149779735683 0.133321485273 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0969162995595 0.0843313296314 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60635146923 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643171806167 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 69.3600765783 62.8969750728 110% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7 16.4300151701 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7376721714 44.7399317507 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.2 90.9928171075 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.4300151701 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.613754768223 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 45.1669603524 37.5504026743 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.33802816901 1.13073093955 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373362742261 0.331212695627 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149591634708 0.0927372745006 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0814209350437 0.0736520305886 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.661339566263 0.579516596996 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154286051141 0.180689518051 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16832869663 0.122183219658 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092179984688 0.0765303033291 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311463395408 0.211926503985 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0868741603801 0.0737400523855 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255194320094 0.203819188451 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798320303124 0.067151250289 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.03092783505 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.