The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisolls where relevant.
» Write at least 150 words.
The given table shows the percentages of consumer spending of 3 categories items in five various countries namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in the year 2002. Overall, people of 5 countries spend more items of food, drinks and tobbaco than 2 other items.
Looking at the detail, turkey and ireland were dominated consuming of food, drinks and tobbaco. It counted over 25% which percentages of them about 32.14% and 28.91% respectively. Conversely, 3 other countries were slightly under 20%. Next to, clothing and footwear items were consumed around 9.00% by italian. It makes italian being the highest consumed the items. Besides, 4 other countries were consumed more or less 6% of items.
The last item was leisure activity and education. Turk people led consume the items which counted 4.35%. Meanwhile, the other countries were consumed around 1.98% and 3.22% respectively.
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turkey and ireland were dominated consuming of food, drinks and tobbaco.
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It counted over 25% which percentages of them about 32.14% and 28.91% respectively.
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It makes italian being the highest consumed the items
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Turk people led consume the items
Turk people led to consume the items
Sentence: Overall, people of 5 countries spend more items of food, drinks and tobbaco than 2 other items.
Error: tobbaco Suggestion: tobacco
Sentence: Looking at the detail, turkey and ireland were dominated consuming of food, drinks and tobbaco.
Error: tobbaco Suggestion: tobacco
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Read a good grammar book. Some sentences are not developed properly.
No. of Words: 142 200
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 142 200
No. of Characters: 716 1000
No. of Different Words: 88 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.452 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.042 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.481 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.501 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.182 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.404 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4