Someone believes that a tax-payer has done his part as a citizen. However, someone believes that a citizen should assume other responsibilities. Discuss both views and present your opinion.
As a citizen, some people think that being a tax-payer is good enough, but I believe that in order to being a good citizen, paying tax is only the fundamental requirement and need more than that.
People who feel that a tax-payer is good enough to be a citizen meets their basic needs. They have access to local infrastructure, free education and essential services, so they think they should at least pay the tax to the government for those services. That leads a pleasure life and make people happy.
On the other hand, some people would put more attention on their moral development in order to be a good citizen, Many people choose to do volunteer works on weekends even they have a full-time and high salary work during work days, they already pay high income tax however the reason why they choose to do that is making contribution to the society can promote social progress, and by doing that gives them a fulfilling life and a sense of belonging.
In my opinion, one important function of tax is to give government opportunities to improve their service to satisfy citizen, once that achieves, people would realize that their tax is in good hands and become more willing to pay tax. The government actually give back the achievements to the tax-payer. It reminds citizens, because of their tax, all citizens can live better. Another important factor is people with high moral standards think only paying money is not enough, it has to be more than that. In the other word, once the physical needs were satisfied, the moral needs had to be followed. Therefore people should not only pay tax, but also make contribution to the society to meet the standard of a good citizen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 582, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs had" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'had' or 'to be had'.
Suggestion: had; to be had
...l needs were satisfied, the moral needs had to be followed. Therefore people should...
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Line 7, column 602, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ed, the moral needs had to be followed. Therefore people should not only pay tax, but als...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'at least', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222910216718 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.170278637771 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105263157895 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0495356037152 0.0437548338989 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0866873065015 0.122226691241 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0278637770898 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56536556214 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0526315789474 0.0326793684256 161% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.00163938923432 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.108359133127 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185758513932 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0061919504644 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1688.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74149659864 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302721088435 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214285714286 0.28420135186 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15306122449 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108843537415 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56536556214 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513605442177 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.2705846093 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.7272727273 20.7743622355 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.117193803 49.517814964 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.454545455 127.492653851 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7743622355 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.1558441558 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.23863636364 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171787860942 0.332605444948 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126777626874 0.102741220458 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.098881737121 0.0668466124924 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581894517749 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.232025687497 0.148594505496 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879135437721 0.134430193775 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599055797716 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36104306198 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0293724871699 0.0638462369009 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145836181972 0.228012699653 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472835424057 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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