some people think that all university students should study whatever they want.Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future,such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Considering the title of university lessons is one of the most important articles in today's world. some people believe that specific subjects should be taught while, others say all kind of studies such as art are essential as well as science and technology.
It is obvious that if a human face the situation in which he has various opportunity to choose, he will act more properly. In other words, when students are given a chance to study regarding their interests, they will be more professional in their field of study.Because they seat in different classes with various topics and get a lot of prospects about that program and as a result, they would choose the course which suits them more. In addition, If pupils know that they can study what they want, they would be more passion about entering the university where as a result, we will see many students in the future.
On the other hand, it is said that teenagers should be permitted to take particular subjects.In some point of view, it is good idea because subjects such as science are difficult and it forces students to study hard whom may waste their time by studying other lessons like art. Likewise, practical courses are more needed for being first world country and improved society.So when we limit the number of topics which are taken at universities around the world, we help students to concentrate on them and get better results.
In my opinion, pupils should opt their favorite field of study as in that way, they would catch their goals and become more interested about sitting at classrooms being graduated one.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223728813559 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.176271186441 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0949152542373 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0271186440678 0.0501214627716 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0813559322034 0.0437548338989 186% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.145762711864 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0406779661017 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50765175001 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0326793684256 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.064406779661 0.0861772015684 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0372881355932 0.021408717616 174% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0271186440678 0.011925033212 227% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1599.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318681318681 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230769230769 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157509157509 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106227106227 0.137316102897 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50765175001 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.9712434714 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0891783567 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 34.125 20.7743622355 164% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3668956257 49.517814964 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 199.875 127.492653851 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 20.7743622355 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.814263465372 246% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 57.2019230769 49.1944974215 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.44047619048 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409633662584 0.332605444948 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124010989683 0.102741220458 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111678929346 0.0668466124924 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.697592792309 0.534860350844 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153634557365 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197512803408 0.134430193775 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981524454005 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.206492675158 0.324371583561 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.058216353204 0.0638462369009 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253257988033 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628060139316 0.058150111329 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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