Your photograph has won a first prize in the photography competition. This will be displayed in an exhibition. Write a letter inviting your friend to the exhibition and include
-what the photograph about
-where did you take it
-what prize you have won
Dear James,
How you doing? I haven’t seen you for ages. It’s a shame that we can’t find time to hang out together. I’m writing to inform you that I have recently participated in a photo competition provided by local photo center. My picture took the first place and will occur in an exhibition on Saturday in Dnepr’s Gallery. I want you to come there at 10 am and take a look at my shot. It’s very important to know your meaning about it.
The photo was taken one month ago during my trip to Crimea. Remember I told you that I will climb the highest mountain in Crimea? I have done it! I did a selfie photo with top of the mountain surrounded by clouds behind me. The photo is very colorful and eye catching, that’s why it took the first place.
One more thing, yesterday the Gallery’s manager called me and informed me about the exhibition and prize. I will be awarded by expensive camera, but I don’t know about model. Will see it on Saturday. By the way, it’s doesn’t matter. The participation is priority number one for me.
Well, I would be very pleased to see you on the exhibition and look forward of hearing back from you.
Best wishes,
Max
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'look', 'well', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200704225352 0.220444632235 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.176056338028 0.167888034529 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0492957746479 0.0606518309736 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0211267605634 0.0506257000042 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.12323943662 0.118615021944 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102112676056 0.107062808482 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0422535211268 0.041066498444 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72995917969 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0211267605634 0.0385302599488 55% => OK
Particles: 0.00704225352113 0.00132118243153 533% => OK
Determiners: 0.056338028169 0.0714148451538 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0211267605634 0.0191574576366 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00352112676056 0.00930345855455 38% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1207.0 1141.60824742 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.134020619 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61395348837 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288372093023 0.284621296913 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227906976744 0.211203875043 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158139534884 0.133321485273 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106976744186 0.0843313296314 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72995917969 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 63.6540364302 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 12.9587628866 147% => OK
Sentence length: 11.3157894737 16.4300151701 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5204168529 44.7399317507 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5263157895 90.9928171075 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3157894737 16.4300151701 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.263157894737 0.613754768223 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 34.1064871481 37.5504026743 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.07692307692 1.13073093955 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334725781947 0.331212695627 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.071893905787 0.0927372745006 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0460841546873 0.0736520305886 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4542076559 0.579516596996 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17828828046 0.180689518051 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105714009828 0.122183219658 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626572338138 0.0765303033291 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249126533924 0.211926503985 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0826508632494 0.0737400523855 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220224077472 0.203819188451 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018552397953 0.067151250289 28% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.0206185567 199% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.