The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given tables illustrate the figures of a research on why 100 thousand people visited overseas from 1994 to 1998 and which countries they travelled in the same time.
Over the period, holiday reasons always left far behind the rest and Western Europe became the most favorable destination.
According to the first chart, there was roundly 15 thousand residents voyaged with entertainment purpose out of 22 thousand people asked in 1994. It covered around 70 percentages and this rate were kept stably until the end of period. In 1994, the number of citizens travelled with business purpose were around 3100 while nearly 2700 people visited to friends and relatives.
The second chart witnessed a domination from Western Europe where was selected by nearly 90 percentages of English people over the period. There were only 919 visitors to North America compared with more than 19 thousand people selected Western Europe as journey’s end in 1994. The number of traveler to other areas was almost 1800 in the same year.
- Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children while others think parents need not do that as children can read books watch TV or movies by themselves Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Art classes such as painting or drawing are important for children s development so it should be compulsory in high school Do you agree or disagree 73
- People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... given tables illustrate the figures of a research on why 100 thousand people visited over...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'second', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262295081967 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.125683060109 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655737704918 0.0946595960268 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0546448087432 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0109289617486 0.0437548338989 25% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.153005464481 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0491803278689 0.0403226058552 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51049384884 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273224043716 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0874316939891 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.016393442623 0.011925033212 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1029.0 1933.35771543 53% => OK
No of words: 168.0 316.048096192 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.125 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20517956788 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410714285714 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279761904762 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0892857142857 0.137316102897 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51049384884 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.037074148 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 60.7236090476 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0891783567 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3276213662 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.9761904762 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.42857142857 1.69124875643 144% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413721671036 0.332605444948 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908890973114 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0471187475357 0.0668466124924 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.68333958191 0.534860350844 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19273677323 0.148594505496 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212436015931 0.134430193775 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977329226114 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241139649512 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0916400903208 0.0638462369009 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290848862801 0.228012699653 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382887169444 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.