The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given tables illustrate the figures of a research on why 100 thousand people visited overseas from 1994 to 1998 and which countries they travelled in the same time.
Over the period, holiday reasons always left far behind the rest and Western Europe became the most favorable destination.
According to the first chart, there was roundly 15 thousand residents voyaged with entertainment purpose out of 22 thousand people asked in 1994. It covered around 70 percentages and this rate were kept stably until the end of period. In 1994, the number of citizens travelled with business purpose were around 3100 while nearly 2700 people visited to friends and relatives.
The second chart witnessed a domination from Western Europe where was selected by nearly 90 percentages of English people over the period. There were only 919 visitors to North America compared with more than 19 thousand people selected Western Europe as journey’s end in 1994. The number of traveler to other areas was almost 1800 in the same year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... given tables illustrate the figures of a research on why 100 thousand people visited over...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'second', 'so', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262295081967 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.125683060109 0.116061578633 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655737704918 0.0759168565197 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0546448087432 0.0366838410393 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0109289617486 0.0131127313244 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153005464481 0.155750635184 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0491803278689 0.0379272487307 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51049384884 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273224043716 0.0210936926555 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0874316939891 0.0948980150116 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016393442623 0.00967000014798 170% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1029.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.9 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.125 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410714285714 0.337110787985 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279761904762 0.247514529752 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.171178102325 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0892857142857 0.112407865282 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51049384884 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.546246751206 117% => OK
Word variations: 60.7236090476 49.3433353143 123% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3276213662 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.625 135.714022679 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.0094962315 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 48.9761904762 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.42857142857 2.94281807926 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413721671036 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908890973114 0.181151798455 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0471187475357 0.0850326197045 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.68333958191 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19273677323 0.157042692854 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212436015931 0.228904883108 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977329226114 0.108899403657 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241139649512 0.367819155151 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0916400903208 0.0812612215331 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290848862801 0.316326947829 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382887169444 0.0921553760075 42% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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