3day job or 5day job
Undoubtedly, one of the foremost and paramount ambitions of all human beings is being prosperous, and they always make an effort to attain this purpose. However, success has different meanings among people, and there are a lot of factors that have effects on it. Indeed, job plays a significant role in bringing people success. While a large number of people believe that it is more enjoyable to work only three days a week for long hours than have work five days a week for shorter hours, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, in my point of view, although working only three days a week has some positive features, working for shorter time is more beneficial.
Working three days a week for long hours is enjoyable for people; due to, it would provide them an opportunity to have more entertainments. It is obvious that all people do not satisfy with a few numbers of pastimes, and they desire to have a wide variety of recreation. However, people who work five days a week could have only a few entertainments by reason of their limited free time. On the other hand, people who work only three days can utilize the other four days in a week in the best way. For instance, they can go to a beach that is far away from their home town and enjoy, or they can go climbing and stay in nature for a few days. These entertainments could fresh the spirit and the mind of people, and it motivates them and enables them to utilize their whole energy in work.
In spite of what mentioned before, it is not debatable that working five days a week also could be enjoyable for people; owing to, people enjoy more when they are satisfied by their performance in their work. It is true that people do not have enough capacity and ability to do their best in work for a long time in a day, and they require resting. Therefore, when people work only three days for a long time, they would be able to work positively only for a certain time and after that their work might not have a positive result. On the other hand, people, who work for a short time in five days, are able to use their whole energy in the work, and their performance in the whole work time would have positive consequences. It causes them to be productive and to be influential in the company. When they feel that they are positive in company, hey would be satisfied, and it would be more enjoyable than other things.
In recapitulation, each person depending on his characteristics and his temperaments prefers to either work only three days a week for long hours or work five days a week for shorter hours. According to what discussed above, people would benefit more by working five days with shorter hours. It is true that by three days they would have more entertainments, but by five days whey would be more satisfied by their performance in job. In fact, people would enjoy more when they are satisfied with their performance rather than by sacrificing their job to have more entertainments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... role in bringing people success. While a large number of people believe that it is more enjoyabl...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'in spite of', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216354344123 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.144804088586 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100511073254 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0442930153322 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0681431005111 0.0685040099705 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12265758092 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0289608177172 0.0351676179071 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57254532183 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272572402044 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0749574105622 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0272572402044 0.0209618222197 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0204429301533 0.0139019557991 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2969.0 2387.08602151 124% => OK
No of words: 533.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5703564728 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.245778611632 0.338922669872 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.18574108818 0.251872472559 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116322701689 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0844277673546 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57254532183 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.382739212008 0.524397521467 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.1099741526 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.380952381 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0402579446 48.84282405 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.380952381 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.380952381 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.955061199 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.43046357616 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0312293396958 0.300154397459 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.191074289276 0.103427244359 185% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.117147298119 0.0752933317313 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514201685483 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108974183282 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180541346311 0.114077575197 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391858214544 0.0781384742642 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.528061803254 0.336927656856 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0434023373854 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0305886001911 0.210909579961 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306668329837 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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