A/D: in the modern word we should never impolite to another person.
Throughout the vicissitudes of life, each person encounters different situation, the important issue is how they deal with them if it does not correspond with their personality? Is it true that they change their behavior due to others conduction? A plethora of people holds this conviction that stability in behavior is an undeniable principle in human relationship. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who take radically different view point and believes that impolite individuals have to be aware of their wrong deeds. I am of the opinion that a former group takes better and wiser point of view, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, people treat according to the circumstances that they have been placed in it; therefore, the reason of rudeness of a person may be a reflect of our behavior. For instance may be unconsciously he feels that push into unsafe position and he wants to defense from himself. Undoubtedly, impolite behavior or aggressive words are the primary reactions for the person who want to scape from the unpleased situation. When people have discussed about special religion or country, these kinds of behaviors or common between the attendances as they do no like others accuse or talk incorrectly about their precious belief or posessons. Therefore, being impolite to this sensitive person would not be sensible attitude.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that in many cases speaker talks about public topic and somepeople percieve its reference to themselves. In fact, by generalizing the issue they may think that these impolite words adress the specific group that contains them. Consequently, they may decide to show reaction while they should overlook those speech since probably they are just some words thatthrwo away without any intention.
Finally yet important, there are some people who intently do impolite actions. Admiteddly, even this category has their own purposes. May be they want to make others angry or nervous. Regardless of the aim of the person who commit to sich this wrong behavior, people who think deeply can readily understand that this person has lack of something, such as intelligent, talent, skill and so forth. Consequently, the wise person prefer to omit them as they are just disable and jealous people who deserve to be alone.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am conviced that in all the situation people should not react impolitely as it is not suitable behaviour for people who build their characters based on stability. In fact, if they percieve the main derive of others behavior, it does not remain any other reason to be rude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e reason of rudeness of a person may be a reflect of our behavior. For instance may be un...
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Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...mmon between the attendances as they do no like others accuse or talk incorrectly ...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...aken into consideration is that in many cases speaker talks about public topic and so...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this speech' or 'those speeches'?
Suggestion: this speech; those speeches
...how reaction while they should overlook those speech since probably they are just some words...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... thatthrwo away without any intention. Finally yet important, there are some people wh...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...n this category has their own purposes. May be they want to make others angry or nervo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13800904977 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75513317078 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2745213801 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.55 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150992647977 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480462920863 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468875891856 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895730549129 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328875142016 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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