The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The given pictorial show the silkworm life cycle explain in four given steps. The second chart shows the process of silk clothes production.
Overall, the life cycle of silk worms has four major stages and the first step begin with eggs lays.
After 10 days, the eggs transform into shape of silkworms larva. They usually eats mulberry leaf as food. In third step, silkworm larva generate the thread a form of cocoons and it takes 3-8 days. The last and four stage, a cocoon made and after 16 days they become moth in final step.
The second picture diagram describes the process of silk cloth production which has 5 steps. In first stage, the silk is boil in the water. After boiling in water the silk threads are unwind and they are around 300-900 meter long. After that, the twisted and sometime the dyed and finally the silk weaved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'eat'
Suggestion: eat
... shape of silkworms larva. They usually eats mulberry leaf as food. In third step, s...
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Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
...r boiling in water the silk threads are unwind and they are around 300-900 meter long....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6644295302 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94183702925 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 18.8140091992 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.1818181818 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357732855726 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121674511804 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883119934971 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20776094023 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912181395473 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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