Animals should be free; people should not keep them in zoos
Everybody knows about the zoo. Everybody includes all persons. Wathching zoo is one of the happiest childhood memory of every person. Every person at any age enjoys wathching zoo's. But when we were watching them we feel pitty on them, and every person thinks that the Animal in zoo should be free people should not keep them in zoo. For e.g. Lion is the king of the jungle and hunting is his main strength if he is in a case he can not able to do freely, and zoo authority feed him taking care of him. It is the type of violation of his natural right which was given by the nature.There are three main reasons that Animal in zoo should be free people should not keep them in zoo.
The first reason is that keeping them in a zoo is violation of their natural right and we indirectly teaching our future generation to take the advantage of that poor animal for our entertainment. For eg. If we pet any bird like parrot, we love them immencely for that we keep that bird in our house in small cage. That bird is can not able to fly. I saw one moveie named RIO that was a same problem happened to that bird.
The second reason is all animals in zoo are from differant country, they have differant inhabitants, enviorments, they live in that country where they are fit to live. But in zoo all animal have to keep together because of funds from government. If the zoo authority fail to provide the proper envirment for that animal it was injurious to their health. For. eg. Camels are found in heated places if that camel is kept in extreem cold whether that animal has to fight for his life. He is not able to sustain in cold enviroment.
The third main reason is that the wild animals are always better in their original place because they are not amenable in human habitation. They are always safe and controlled in their inhabitation. If they become wild for any reasons it it is always in adverce effect to the human beings. For e.g. Lions, Tigers are the carniverarance in nature. If they become wild they can attack anybody, they do not have any emotional bonding to any body. So it is always harmful for all people.
In a conclusion that kepping animal in zoo is violation of their rights and is against the law of nature.
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Sentence: For e.g. Lion is the king of the jungle and hunting is his main strength if he is in a case he can not able to do freely, and zoo authority feed him taking care of him.
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Sentence: If the zoo authority fail to provide the proper envirment for that animal it was injurious to their health.
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Sentence: Every person at any age enjoys wathching zoo's. But when we were watching them we feel pitty on them, and every person thinks that the Animal in zoo should be free people should not keep them in zoo.
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Sentence: For eg. If we pet any bird like parrot, we love them immencely for that we keep that bird in our house in small cage.
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Sentence: I saw one moveie named RIO that was a same problem happened to that bird.
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Sentence: The second reason is all animals in zoo are from differant country, they have differant inhabitants, enviorments, they live in that country where they are fit to live.
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Sentence: For. eg. Camels are found in heated places if that camel is kept in extreem cold whether that animal has to fight for his life.
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Sentence: If they become wild for any reasons it it is always in adverce effect to the human beings.
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Sentence: For e.g. Lions, Tigers are the carniverarance in nature.
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Sentence: In a conclusion that kepping animal in zoo is violation of their rights and is against the law of nature.
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