A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. Yes, I do agree with this sentence.
people working hard to earn money with the help of their knowledge and skills. As people getting experienced in their profession they become more famous and highly paid persons. Like, Doctors, Engineers and many more as they getting experienced they becomes more famous. Some people pay money for consultation as they are experienced people.
People should earn money with morality, dignity and honesty. We should earn money which should give a sound sleep and not the restless life.
Some people who have a lot of money are not happy and people who doesn't have money are the happiest people. Some people thinks that earning money is a successful life. Some thinks that being well known human being is a successful life. Like Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam who did not have earn money but have earned a huge respect in everybody's heart. Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam who has done a great work in research for nation.
Everybody can earn money by different ways. Some earns with honest way and some earns with corrupted way. Like Don's and many political leaders who earns money by corruption. They earns a lot of money but they do not have a successful life. Every person who has a lot of money is not a successful person.
A successful person is one who earns a lot of money for a great work to be done. A successful person is one who can manages everything. Who knows how to earn money and how to keep family and professional life differently.
We can earn a lot of money to unlimited extent but it should give you a sound sleep and the happy smile on your face.
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| 2020-10-09 | Risma Sibarani | 71 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
.... Yes, I do agree with this sentence. people working hard to earn money with the hel...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... Like, Doctors, Engineers and many more as they getting experienced they becomes m...
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Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...y more as they getting experienced they becomes more famous. Some people pay money for ...
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Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t of money are not happy and people who doesnt have money are the happiest people. Som...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat earning money is a successful life. Some thinks that being well known human bein...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam who did not have earn money but have earned a huge respect in...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'earn'
Suggestion: earn
...ers who earns money by corruption. They earns a lot of money but they do not have a s...
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Line 6, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'manage'
Suggestion: manage
...one. A successful person is one who can manages everything. Who knows how to earn money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56418918919 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37520663435 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432432432432 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.6572281388 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4090909091 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44606907516 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170274457168 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144576026536 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272298474546 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158475456552 0.056905535591 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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