People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
One of the most common purposes is life is to reach happiness. The vast majority of people think that happiness is about of doing only things beloved, avoiding things they not enjoy doing. Although, this position it is completely understandable, I think that life has bright and shadows and not few times along our life, we must go through dark episodes in pursuing something better. My view is based on the following concepts: Sacrifice, Responsibility and Maturity.
Firstly, we have to understand the value of sacrifice. This concept is fundamental in every stages of our life, and it consist in doing things that will eventually bring a reward, but dislike at the time we are doing it. Moreover, the reward is likely to be for us or for someone else. For example, I hate go to the dentist, but I am willing to do it just because I prefer the reward of not having a tooth pain.
Secondly, and foremost is Responsibility. Although, for many people this word may sound boring, it is a great value to pursue in life, and it has to do, with do what you have to do, no matter whether you enjoy doing it or not. Whatever the profession or activity we work in, having responsibility is one of the key element to succeed. For instance, because I am responsible, the day before a board presentation I usually work until midnight, despite I do not like to do it.
At lastly, a wide concept like Maturity. Many people believes that the life is too short to do activities that they do not enjoy doing it. However, along of our life we should realize that life is compounded by moments, some of them are good while other are not, and, it is important to realize that doing some tasks we do not want to do, can be a sing of maturity. For example, attending to classes after a party, could be a truly sign of maturity.
In summary, sometimes doing activities or things that we do not like doing, can be a huge opportunity to develop personal qualities such as willingness to sacrifice, sense of responsibility and maturity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'consists'?
Suggestion: consists
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Suggestion:
...at you have to do, no matter whether you enjoy doing it or not. Whatever the prof...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it. However, along of our life we should realize that life is compounded by momen...
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Line 4, column 426, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('truly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('sign') instead of another adjective.
...ding to classes after a party, could be a truly sign of maturity. In summary, sometimes doi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57458563536 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77404189695 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508287292818 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0268998592 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4117647059 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432492813336 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126022037309 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158897578793 0.0737576698707 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247862289064 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630554226631 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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