Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves.
Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.
With the increase in crime rate, the need to inhibit the occurrence of felony has become the need of the hour. However, who should take charge of this responsibility is a moot point. Before coming to a reasoned conclusion, this essay will discuss if it should be the authorities or the people.
A section of our society concedes that, the government should be accountable for curbing crime. This is because; they have trained professionals to handle the problem. For instance, criminologists study the pattern of the crime and have the advantage of their knowledge in criminal profiling. Moreover, the human force under their disposal will be instrumental in curtailing the occurrence of criminal activities. Hence, they believe that the authorities should be held responsible for controlling crime.
However, contrarily, there is a belief that each individual should be cautious and protect himself. They presume, when each person is capable of defending, it increases the risk involved in the crime. Consequently, occurrence of illegal activities can be undermined. Furthermore, it will not be economical to expand the police force proportional to the population and also we have to take the burden off the officials’ shoulders, so that the whole system is can function more effectively. Owing to this, few people consider individuals liable for their security.
Nevertheless, in my opinion, when it comes to repressing the manifestation of crime, it should be a collective accountability of both the public and the government. On the grounds that, police and individuals have their own superiorities over the other, a combined effort is essential for a productive outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23717182906 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9582985758 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278598469519 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906337286815 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713935866021 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160755235512 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304721970491 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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