The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

Essay topics:

The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

The diagram depicts the process of converting animal skin into the several leather goods.

The first stage is to hang the animal hide on the wire for drying. After this, it is transferred through lorry to the factory for further production. On arrival, the hide is submerged in the water and lime for some time and then again it is soaked in the vat of lime. Having been cleaned in this way, it is further dispatched to the rolling machine which lends a helping hand to make it softer and flattened.

Later, it again soaked in the Tannin which is a heterogeneous mixture of a water and vegetable matter. In the next stage, the animal hide is polished by the rollers on its all surface. It is transported by the lorry to the other factory, in the following step, where production of leather material takes place, for instance, handbags, footwear, sports equipment and other material.

Overall, all steps are mandatory in the process of producing leather products.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tory for further production. On arrival, the hide is submerged in the water and l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82035928144 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57281635305 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4267782146 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0665341112488 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280868147973 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458229302258 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602921397407 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514728017387 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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