Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern days, people's mind about studying at university have changed due to globalization process which most employers require special diploma from academic substances to accept a job. It is believed by some people that university or college degree better way to achieve a success in labor market, while others argue that they need to gain experience before starting academic level which means that they may start to work after school. In this essay, I am going to discuss about these opinions and state my own position.
To begin with, university degree is one of the main important requirements of today's employers. It is mainly because that people who graduate from universities or colleges can gain many useful skills except knowledge and theoretical resources. For example, nowadays, universities teach not only subjects which related to exact science or specialization, addition to former and latter they can teach some practical subjects which will be helpful in people's future career. These skills after graduation can help you to be a versatile person. According to statistics, in Kazakhstan 90 % of graduates get a job after 5 year of their graduation, while approximately 85 % of all unemployed people are without any academic degree.
On the other hand, when people work after school can help to them to gain experience earlier than their coevals, moreover they can learn by their experiences and mistakes and practicing every day. For instance, one of the wealthiest person's in the world Warren Baffet have never studied at university, despite of this he achieve a tremendous success without any degree.
To sum up, when people studying at tertiary education, they can gain and learn many useful skills, whereas people who work after school help to them to get more experience and learn by their own mistakes. I believe that studying at higher education substances will be better before starting to work and I think their advantages prevailed working after high school benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
...udied at university, despite of this he achieve a tremendous success without any degree...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7420941909 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3483491521 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282445089065 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970721122046 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579519254591 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174459510479 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623567071716 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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