Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environment pollution. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays, air travel is considered to be the fastest & luxurious way of travel. Earlier people used to travel through their cars, which are still inexpensive in some context. In this essay we will discuss whether air travel needs to be restricted as it is harming our mother nature.
Firstly, there are many people who are in to the support of restricting air travel and up to an extent they believe is true. If we look around our self, where in a journey of few miles which can be covered in public transport which are more eco friendly people don't opt for it. Instead some feel it is better for their status, but they don't understand travelling such a short distance through mode of air is actually quite expensive as it burns lot of ethanol oil which is very expensive and can be rebuilt through natural process which take decades.
In contrast, other people hold notion that that restricting air travel doesn't cause air pollution which can destroy our mother nature. If people travel through their cars for long journey may cause consumption of more natural resources, as people often carry bundle of things which are not required at their trip, this thing bound the travelers at the time of travel through air, which leads to less pressure on aircraft and decrease the fuel consumption.
I believe putting restriction on air travel should not be done, as in odd time people have to travel through air for shortest distance, but people should understand if they are travelling for their status they should opt for some environmentally friendly option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85767790262 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47955271497 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6732327363 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.111111111 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247774227239 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130643338086 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537484362335 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185187578959 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439924304365 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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