Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern society, never before have we observed such a large number of people deciding to conceive children later in their life and this trend tends not to lessen. Although there are numerous reasons behind this scenario, I must agree that its drawbacks do outweigh its benefits.
To begin with, there are factors leading to this phenomenon. First and foremost, in the past, women who were considered as the "weaker sex" were obliged to do domestic chores such as cooking, cleaning and child-rearing. They were made to become housewives and, eventually, were to have children early. On the contrary, living in an egalitarian society, women have obtained the same rights as their male counterparts thanks to feminism. As the result, they were able to obtain education and appropriate qualifications, assisting them in getting decent jobs, getting their own career; hence, they decide to get married later in life.
It is undeniable that delaying having children do have various merits for parents such as gaining them more freedom, helping them enjoy life and have their own career; however, it could be counter-argued that many egregious effects can be an enormous burden on not only the the parents but also the children. One of the most catastrophic effects is the generation gap. Some may neglect this conundrum but little do they know age discrepancy the parents and their children can cause numerous problems. For exemplification, getting to know a child can be problematic if the parents have no relevant experience. Moreover, children who are given birth by older parents have the tendency to have weaker physique than their peer; some may contract incorrigible innate illnesses.
From the basis of the afore-mentioned arguments, parents have to take the time of giving birth to their children in order to have a healthy young generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...s can be an enormous burden on not only the the parents but also the children. One of t...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'neglects'.
Suggestion: neglects
...effects is the generation gap. Some may neglect this conundrum but little do they know ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21262458472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85241438287 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1682266022 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.692307692 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290132501891 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872955793309 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657732987585 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167407242307 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531292611479 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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