Nowadays, in a society where lots of families are dual-income, hence, they do not have sufficient time to take care of their children. There is one reason that lie behind parents to have no time to spend with their . This essay will analyse that this issue can cause possible problems
The main factor is that parents use their time up working in a office. Aparently, parents are working much more than a main part of day whereby They strive to provide their children’s needs and giving them opportunities to get better education. Naturally, having worked for hours on end, they become quite run-down and want to rest to be prepared for next tiring workday. For instance, at 7 a.m mother and father leave their home to go to the work and they return back at 7 p.m. Consequently , although either parents or their children want to do some activites with their parents or children, it is unfeasible due to reasons that is mentioned above. As a result child-minding is used in these cases. If managed properly, it can be perfectly viable alternatives, but otherwise, this may call forth harmful trouble
as for probable problems which failure to give sufficent attention to and spend time with children can make are several. Fisrtly, parents give their children to look after to after-school care but it has to be advisable for parents to act as role models for behaviour by spending as much time as possible with their children, this means that not being with family may increase the risk of children failing victim to crimes such as abduction or coming under the impact of negative peer pressure. Secondly, parents are unable to provide emotional support. Due to lack of attention and care, they can be diverted their attention to some activities that may harm them such as drug attention, alchocolism and to play truant from school
in a conclusion, children must be attached importance like spending time with them, giving them emotional support, assisting in their school assignements. Prvoding them with adequate time, attention , and love are primary to have a secure and harmonious family
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- Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spend less and less time with their children What is the reason for this What problems can this cause 60
- Nowadays, in a society where lots of families are dual-income, hence, they do not have sufficient time to take care of their children. There is one reason that lie behind parents to have no time to spend with their . This essay will analyse that this iss 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as for, as to, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9900990099 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73640687791 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587458745875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.080729833 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.2 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295828978571 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114418600773 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676779237906 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210296287338 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131878285778 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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