A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the collage
The same nation curriculum for the students has some advantage and disadvantages. It seems that authorities evaluate its pros and cons in long-term period and short-term period and then such an important decision go over a country.
It is assumed that students should get familiar with a large spectrum of knowledge about their country or world regardless to their local environment. Actually, it may be wise to approve a geography course in which all students in United States learn about a famous national park in United States. Although in future they do not an opportunity to learn specific details about that famous park, it raises the question: "is it really necessary for all the students knows details of a nation park?" In several cases, the students asked to answer some irrelevant materials to their local geography question; and they cannot remember the details they have taught.
Secondly, the same nation program may waste resources of a nation like students' time or teachers' wage. Students spend thousands of hours in school before entering college, hence it is better that their time be scheduled effectively. The government should pay millions to teachers annually. It is obvious that some states needs more lower than engineer or some local governments needs much more manager than dancer; thus students need to be prepared for their local community and it is better to train them to fill jobs' spots.
Moreover, individuals have different abilities and their talents varies in a large range. If students with a high performance in math is asked to memorize a huge volume of books' names, they may lose their passionate to go to school as well as their tendency to attend a collage. Providing 'local-fitted' program of study based on students' talents and abilities not only motivate them to do their job at school well, but also encourage them to find their ways and continue their studying at collage.
In summary, many drawbacks and benefits can be expressed for a same nation curriculum. It may be wise to enforce a same nation program at first glance but drawbacks of the program are more serious than its benefits. The authorities is better to seek for local needs of society and arrange a 'tide-program' that meet those needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...am may waste resources of a nation like students time or teachers wage. Students spend t...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
.... It is obvious that some states needs more lower than engineer or some local governments...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ious than its benefits. The authorities is better to seek for local needs of socie...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a tide-program that meet those needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02933333333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67282488931 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522666666667 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5092296538 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268261328172 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984366820971 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848514412693 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144011410174 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411163917179 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.