some people say that its better for children to grow up in the city, while others says growing up in the country side is better. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion ?
At present, many controversial debates possess on a Global wide regarding the convenient place for children either city nor village side area. Although, I strongly agree about children should spend their childhood in countryside areas.
On the one hand, many people likes to live in city area, because everything is near to hand such as college, schools, hospitals, some other educational centers and parks. Secondly, some metropolitan cities provide high standard education and help to adopt a extracurricular activities.
Even though, the countryside area are blessed with their own specialties so that these place plays an important role for accomplished a person's characteristics. For example, in village, most of the families live with their grand parents. So it may matriculate the specialty of culture and traditions which our ancestors were followed. Village areas are less polluted than cities, so it is suitable for youngsters. Even though, the village area have a attractive atmosphere and blessed with a beautiful scenic landscape. Hence the children has been attracted by village side area than cities.
For instance, a child should be lived in village side area, through only they knows the importance of relationship, culture, and traditions.
To conclude, some village area plays an essential role for build a humanitarian personality in children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5619047619 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0506681176 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671428571429 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9386347374 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966912572257 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392520471766 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248082321366 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618747999935 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177777771695 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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