The pie chart shows the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The chart demonstrates the major reasons of immigration and emigration in UK in2007.
Overall, it is evident that migration for career was the most important reason.
30% of immgration in UK in 2007 were for employment, and the figure for this reason of emigration was similar, which was 29%. The second reason that made people come out of UK was to looking for a job, which accounted for 22% but the percentage of people who came in UK for that reason was only 12%. More than one forth of the people coming to UK for study while only 4% of people leaving UK to study.
The number of people came in and out from the UK to join a new family was quite equal, which were 15% and 13% respectively. Nearly one fifth of people leaving UK for no reason but the number of people who immigrated in UK and did not state the reason was a small number (6%). Other reasons accounted for 14% of people emigrated in UK in 2007 and the same figure was seen in the number of immigrated people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3152173913 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37205692686 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472826086957 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8328677804 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170248285032 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101147253636 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246981939847 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123054335073 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137672825445 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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