The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
How to measure a country’s success has nowadays aroused controversial opinions. To evaluate the greatness of a country, first we need to find out where the decision-making power is held.
Obviously in a democratic republic or communist republic, which is most commonly seen around the world, the decision-making power is ultimately in the hands of people. It is the fundamental function of this kind of government to serve, which also means that we can simply deem the government and officials as employees of its citizens. Just imagine, if you were the boss, what would you possibly ask your emp...
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