Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For centuries, men and women have been deemed fit for certain type of work only. However I believe this is slowly changing and gender is no longer a primary rider for one to choose a career.
An argument can be made that certain types of jobs are naturally suited for a particular gender. These jobs either require physical agility or behavioural expertise that can only be expected from a specific gender. For examples, women are historically known to be more supportive emotionally and can be seen working in professions such as nursing and child care. Similarly men are thought to be more strong...
- In countries like Japan the population is getting older are the effects of aging population on society is negative or positive Discuss both views and give your opinion 80
- Improvements in health education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations However the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility of helping the poorer nations in such areas 80
- Every country should provide basic health care to its people even if they don't have access to advanced technology. Comment. 75
- A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress What should people do to stay healthy in your country Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples for your own knowledge and ex 70
- Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 76
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