The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century

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The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century

The pie chart provides information about how Agriculture, Manufacturing and Business and Financial services contributed to the UK economy in the twentieth century. 

Overall, there are two basic general trends apparent: downward and upward. As regards the first, at the beginning of the period, the contribution of Agriculture and Manufacturing was down over the year, The former experienced a short-period rise to 1950, but after that it plummetted to 2%. Likewise, the trend for Manufacturing was downward. It slid down steadily by the same proportion to around 15%. The most significant feature...

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