Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Every society suffers the negative effects of scandals, yet it may also receive scandals' benefit effects. We should reflect this issue multi-dimensionally against all odds as the world itself has been formulated into a step of sophisticated and versatile. That is to say, the usefulness of scandals varies depending on different situations.
First off, there is no denying that scandals can expose the darkness of our society to public and administers could adjust or even correct the errors. Watergate Event is regarded as one of the most famous politic scandal in US history for the reason tha...
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You give me some suggestion
You give me some suggestion about this sentence "On one hand, scandals with respect to food safety, moral corruption or dishonest event benefit our society a lot as these scandals can sever as a catalyst to reform and ameliorate bad phenomena existing insidiously in our society." However, I cannot understand the suggestion clearly,such as "A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective" It is partly because my poor reading comprehension. Can you revise this sentence for me? Just show me the revised sentence. Thanks a lot.
Well, it is a correct
Well, it is a correct sentence. Our E-rater considering "dishonest event" as "dishonest events". Actually the subject is "scandals". So the verb is "benefit",instead of "benefits" or "benefited".
Sentence: On one hand, scandals with respect to food safety, moral corruption or dishonest event benefit our society a lot as these scandals can sever as a catalyst to reform and ameliorate bad phenomena existing insidiously in our society.
Description: The fragment event benefit our is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace benefit with verb, past tense
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to ameliorate and bad
Sentence: However, we should reflect this issue multi-dimensionally against all odds as the world itself has been formulated into a step of sophisticated and versatile.
Error: multi-dimensionally Suggestion: multidimensional
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Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 469 350
No. of Characters: 2523 1500
No. of Different Words: 284 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.654 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.38 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.914 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 190 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 154 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 109 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 77 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.471 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5