Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this high-speed generation, there is only one thing that does not alter, changing. However, when we keep ourselves chasing the time, some people afraid to be different, and others believed that remain different is always better than the old -style.
While time keep going, two kinds of situation remained, which is habits and unpredictable future. All of us have habits; therefore, we understand that why we named it habit, in most of circumstances, they do not change. Nevertheless, the more important issue is that some people are afraid their future to be altered, so they keep doing same job which they do not like or fallowing the steps that someone did in their own life.
Even though, in some people aspect, it is obviously not positive enough. Due to no one has same life conditions and characteristics, there is no equal life that we could fallow. In addition, these people prefer gain victories in creating own life.
It is not always such positive if someone maintains changing but lost themselves. In Chinese, there is a phrase, which reminds us do not forget our root. It also means altering is helpful only we keep the root.
In my opinion, there are always two sides in every choice, no matter what we choose, a positive attitude will always lead to a good way. Some of us prefer a distinction life, such as me. I have chosen to further my education in London 2 years before, although there are many barriers on the road, applying scholarship, arguing with family and getting a high rank of IELTS. The positive emotion origin which choice that I have made; therefore, I believe it is more important to accept gladly the choice while the situation changed than blame the wrong circumstances and avoiding change.
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Sentence: However, when we keep ourselves chasing the time, some people afraid to be different, and others believed that remain different is always better than the old -style.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: replace remain to remaining
Sentence: While time keep going, two kinds of situation remained, which is habits and unpredictable future.
Description: The fragment time keep going is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace keep with verb, past tense
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and habits
Sentence: Even though, in some people aspect, it is obviously not positive enough.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: for some people's aspect
Sentence: I have chosen to further my education in London 2 years before, although there are many barriers on the road, applying scholarship, arguing with family and getting a high rank of IELTS.
Description: The word further is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to further
Sentence: The positive emotion origin which choice that I have made; therefore, I believe it is more important to accept gladly the choice while the situation changed than blame the wrong circumstances and avoiding change.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to than and blame
Sentence: Nevertheless, the more important issue is that some people are afraid their future to be altered, so they keep doing same job which they do not like or fallowing the steps that someone did in their own life.
Error: fallowing Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2 (still have grammatical issues, read a gram book)
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
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No. of Different Words: 171 200
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.587 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5