People in all modern societies use drugs,but today`s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs,and at an increasingly early age.Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern society.Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
The number of drug users are increasing day after day in modern society. Some sociologists believe that young people take bad examples from relatives and acquaintances.
Firstly, purchaseing of drugs are great and illegal business all over the world. Salers try to expand it among teenagers especially at schools. That`s why surrounding of people is crucial. If you didnt opt right friend in this case he will stray you and will be bad example for you. Such persons always offer to use narcotic to their friends and acquaintances. Morever, problems and difficulties at early ages such as death of ...
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Sentence: Firstly, purchaseing of drugs are great and illegal business all over the world.
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Sentence: Therefore, parents should control their children and assist them in makeing friends.
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Sentence: For example, in Italy and other european countries people can legally gain drugs from shpos.
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Sentence: There is no doubt that government should ban it and encourage people to healthy life such as creating competitions and educateing people.
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Sentence: As a result, all members of the society have to help to prevent riseing of narcotic users.
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