Argument Type - The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore, a chain of movie-rental stores. "Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Movies Galore's ten movie-rental stores. Raising prices is not a g

Essay topics:
Argument Type - The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore, a chain of movie-rental stores. "Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Movies Galore's ten movie-rental stores. Raising prices is not a g

The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore, a chain of movie-rental stores.

"Because of declining profits, we must reduce operating expenses at Movies Galore's ten movie-rental stores. Raising prices is not a good option, since we are famous for our low prices. Instead, we should reduce our operating hours. Last month our store in downtown Marston reduced its hours by closing at 6:00 p.m. rather than 9:00 p.m. and reduced its overall inventory by no longer stocking any DVD released more than five years ago. Since we have received very few customer complaints abou...

*** The full content of this essay is available to VIP readers

Votes
Average: 8.6 (8 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2012-04-15 fdrg9iit 86 view
Essay Categories

Comments

It is on top:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/gmatgre

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 34 15
No. of Words: 668 350
No. of Characters: 3196 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.084 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.784 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.43 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 222 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 159 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 107 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.647 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.207 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.618 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5