The question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Job satisfaction is more important than making a lot of money.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are lots of work types in today's businesses. While some people are occupied with jobs which they desired before, others preferences are different. Today, money is matter when a person have to choose his work. Both economical and social factors lead human beings to select jobs with more money.
Earning money brings about economical facilities. When you earn much more your life standards ascend. Moreover, children who have wealthy parents may generally take much quality educations at private schools, as a result these children grow more sophisticated than others. Prosperous people have more opportunities to enjoy sufficient houses which are even in expensive residences which are located in selective regions. In addition, the rich have more chance to reach sound nutrition which are generally expensive. So, prosperity facilitates our lives in various aspects.
There become social advantages when somebody has been paid more. One of them is about social activities. For instance, people who often go to movies, balls and sports competitions are generally prosperous. To add, affluent humans can attend more meetings, conventions which requires attendance fees. Furthermore, there some places which don`t allow people which don`t have expensive clothes in some cities. Therefore, to attend or access these places, one should afford to purchase designer clothes that are very expensive. Thus, if someone wants to be more socialized must earn more money.
To cut long to short, because earning more money has advantages, people should select jobs which provide more. A good salary provides more options for socialization and helps someone benefit more from expensive things in the world. So i insist that one ought to choose job which pays more money.
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