Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best things in life don’t cost money
There are some topics that we have definite thoughts. However, this topic trails me to the ambiguity. Sometimes I think without any money we can be happy for some period, nevertheless other times I think in life we don’t have to let money play a great role in our life
First of all, the word ‘happy’ only consist of 5 words but you can’t imagine how much meanings are lay under it. To be happy, sometimes you need only to hear some words such as ‘my dear’, ‘I love you’, ‘I’m very lucky that I have a person like you in my life’ and etc. To know that someone is there for you make you feel confident or yourself happy. Saying this words don’t cost any money.
In another hand, you can not say that I am happy if you go to clean roads every day at 5:00 or 6:00 AM till the 8:00 PM. Even someone says ‘I love you’ every day, believe me, you will not hear this saying because you will be busy with making your small hut warm, or you will be busy with buying a food, either buying an attire for your children with only $60 or $80. Or while you are working, your little daughter cook a meal rather than going to school. How can you be happy? This means sometimes you need money to be happy.
In another case, one of the best things in life is to be healthy or to have fun. Yes? To be healthy, it doesn’t mean you have to do some extraordinary thing. It is enough to walk or do sport every day morning or evening in the park. There is no any fee that you have to pay to the park. It is free, go and attempt to be healthy. I just want to give an example that money can’t buy. I know a person who suffers from cancer has millions however he can’t cure himself with that money. Sometimes being a wealthy doesn’t mean that you will be happy or healthy. There are some cases that money can not cope with.
To have fun with your friends, of course, free. You will be entertained by them and entertain them, together you will read books, discuss them. Or listen to music and talk to each other your problems, or you will share your gladness and relish your day. You will have memorable days with your friends. Of course, this will not cost any money, but don’t forget that you have to go out or invite your friend to your home, or you have to go there. To go out will cost money because you have to dinner or have a cup of tea, coffee which will not be free. Going or inviting your friend almost, but will cost some money.
In conclusion, never give up trying and never give up saying good words to each other. Try hard to have enough money and try to be happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, even so, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28031225932 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.0575276818 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4827586207 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2413793103 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96551724138 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301356894347 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928867013015 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066317776561 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16226182299 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803080436095 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.22 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.