Now many movies are based on books. Which option do you prefer : reading books before watching movies or viewing movies before reading them?
Although there is no official consensus on the topic statement, I side with the argument that it is better to watch movies before reading books. In this essay, I will provide reasons to espouse my point of view.
To begin with, watching movies first can allow us to get information efficiently and save time. Today, we live in an ever-changing circumstance. As a result, we experience struggles when we try to catch up with a huge volume of newly-released books. Because movies based on the books give us good summary of them and convey core ideas in short time, we can get new information quickly and efficently through watching the movies. For example, a recent survey by Seoul National University found a huge difference between two groups of people in spending hours reading books. The first group consisted of those who read books after watching movies based on them, and the other group was made up of those who read the books before watching the movies. The researcher found that the former was likely to spend shorter hours reading books than the latter. The respondents in the first group stated that they could read book faster and understand core contents of them easily since they had a more complete understanding of books through the movies.
On top of that, watching movies first can be more enjoyable to people than watching them after reading books. It is undeniable that watching movies with closed friends and family is one of the popular pastime in the world. When we watch movies after reading books, we feel less fun because we already knew the plot of the movies. Moreover, we tend to tell frends and family members a spoiler. It can ruin all fun of our friends and family members. Thus, watching movies first should be given serious consideration in this context. For instance, when I and my friends watched the 'Harry Poter' movie series based on famous books that we had read, we felt bored since we knew the result of these movies. I and my friends felt unhappy and gloomy by the end of the day. However, I and my family members enjoyed watching 'the Iron man' movie series before reading the original comic books. We could consentrate on those movies with fascinating stories and nice visual effects. By enjoying the movies, we could be relaxing and distance ourselves from routine stresses.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the advantages of watching movies first far outweigh those of reading books first because of getting information quickly and being more entertaining.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8761682243 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52053644744 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488317757009 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9813305621 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8636363636 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37095990938 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116784967212 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988651471923 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245944103627 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485804367642 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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