animals are used by human beings for profit in many ways. however, some people do not agree with this use of animals. discuss both views and express your own opinion.
Nature create so many beautiful or useful things on earth for human being and it is universely acknoledge that animals are useful creation of god for human being. some proportion of folk think that animals are profitable for human in many way but others have conflicted view on this. Here I would like to discuss both side with my own perception. To set in, there are manifold points to spport that animals are lucrative. First and formost, the animals provide milk to us to make wide range of products and for food industries they provide meat and beaf and they also provide cosmetic product moreoveralso help in trevelling especially in desert area. So animals help humans in various field
By contrary, some folk think that animals killing for purpose of eating, cosmetic, commercialisation and so on is very unkindness or keeping animals in cages also a example of cruelness and give them unsufficient food. Beating animals and forcefully loading heavy weaght also against animals rights. so, some people say that animals have own rights thats why leave them free.
From my notion, animals as boon for human being but there is also a human responsbility to keep animals with deserving protection like zoo or houses beside that let them free wich is harmful for social being.
In a nutshell, as per my above discussion, I would like to say that humans should be use animals by providing appropriate protection and with adjustment for their well being
Sentence: Nature create so many beautiful or useful things on earth for human being and it is universely acknoledge that animals are useful creation of god for human being. some proportion of folk think that animals are profitable for human in many way but others have conflicted view on this.
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Sentence: By contrary, some folk think that animals killing for purpose of eating, cosmetic, commercialisation and so on is very unkindness or keeping animals in cages also a example of cruelness and give them unsufficient food.
Description: The fragment folk think that is rare
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Sentence: Beating animals and forcefully loading heavy weaght also against animals rights. so, some people say that animals have own rights thats why leave them free.
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Sentence: Nature create so many beautiful or useful things on earth for human being and it is universely acknoledge that animals are useful creation of god for human being. some proportion of folk think that animals are profitable for human in many way but others have conflicted view on this.
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Sentence: To set in, there are manifold points to spport that animals are lucrative.
Error: spport Suggestion: support
Sentence: First and formost, the animals provide milk to us to make wide range of products and for food industries they provide meat and beaf and they also provide cosmetic product moreoveralso help in trevelling especially in desert area.
Error: moreoveralso Suggestion: moreover also
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Error: beaf Suggestion: beef
Sentence: Beating animals and forcefully loading heavy weaght also against animals rights. so, some people say that animals have own rights thats why leave them free.
Error: weaght Suggestion: weight
Sentence: From my notion, animals as boon for human being but there is also a human responsbility to keep animals with deserving protection like zoo or houses beside that let them free wich is harmful for social being.
Error: responsbility Suggestion: responsibility
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