What is a very important skill for a person in order to be successful in the world today. Chose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Our world is a competitive place which has many spheres and fields which requires special skills and experiences from people. People have different approaches and thoughts, also they master different skills for their own needs. In my own point of view, one of the most required skills that a person should master is to know English language.
To begin with, in our world there are a few large expanded languages thanks to what people can communicate with each other from different countries, moreover English is considered International language among all the countries in the world. This is important because people need to know one specific mean of communication which can insurance them to cope with foreigners in different life situations and accidents. For example, today one of the best and expanded activities for people is considered to be traveling. Mastering English people can go whenever they want because there isn’t any barrier that makes them confused and afraid of strange environments since they have the key skill for them to get around anywhere. In addition, if people know English, regardless they need it or not, in their occupations they will benefit from it and get advantages as well.
Secondly, if people are not willing to learn English for just their daily needs, they can have disadvantages in their jobs or other spheres compared to those people who master it fluently, since it is an international language almost all the technological systems are put into labor with the help of English, so mastering it is another benefit for people all around the globe. Today, almost in each workplaces jobs are done through computer and if you master English you will be able to work better and easier because many software updates are in English. Moreover, during job interviews supervisors are eager to have workers who knows the language since it is another necessity for the company while doing any deals.
To wrap up, people should master this language because it is considered the second one almost in each county , furthermore, it keeps you in the state of the art with the current world and brings you many advantages in any spheres of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...red the second one almost in each county , furthermore, it keeps you in the state ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 362.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02486187845 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65449548078 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505524861878 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.397649536 49.2860985944 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.583333333 110.228320801 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140431453065 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660255330645 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451222913107 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931579489331 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518107568982 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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