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Nowadays most of the people want to live in big cities rather than living in a small town. Both have its advantages and disadvantages. This essay will discuss the issue of living in small town or big city.
Most young adults prefer to be in big cities for their education and job purpose.In this new world its not easy to get a job without outstanding performances. For that we have to select good colleges or universities. Most of the colleges and institutions are in cities. So people wanted to shift to large cities. All software companies and Industries are located in cities. So people are thinking to shift from small towns to cities where companies are located.
People have all the facilities like libraries to read and get the books,stadiums and grounds to play,gyms for exercises, theaters to enjoy the movies. But cost of living is more in cities than towns.
But due to urbanization there is rapid increase in the population. It has become a problem for the government to give good facilities like sheltar and water. Cities are becoming polluted by industrialization and urbanization. This mostly affects the health of the people in turn causes more diseases.
In small town there are plenty of resources of water and fresh food and vegetables and are not much polluted areas. So less chances being unhealthy. So elder people after their retirement they want to settle in small towns. But education levels are not that great and job sources are less in towns.
So it is completely based on individual's priority.Depending on their needs and family needs they have to decide where to live. Opinion may vary depending on the persons point of view.
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Sentence: It has become a problem for the government to give good facilities like sheltar and water.
Error: sheltar Suggestion: shelter
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.667 21.0
Content is not well organized.
better to have 5 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Characters: 1344 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.683 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.587 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.274 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.281 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5